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Counter-Arguments Practice Set 2

Four more debatable statements with four-part model counter-arguments, on borders, AFSPA, technology and merit

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A second set of worked counter-arguments, following the four-part structure and connectors taught in developing counter arguments: state the claim fairly, concede the grain of truth, turn with your reasons strongest first, and conclude with a qualified position. Try to draft each before reading the model, and check that you genuinely conceded something before you turned.


Worked example 1

Prompt

"A border should simply be sealed completely, since the only good border is one that nothing can cross."

Model counter-argument

It is true that a porous border is a real security risk, and that infiltration, smuggling and the movement of arms across an unguarded line have cost lives, so the wish for a tightly controlled frontier is understandable. To that extent the statement has force. However, the phrase "sealed completely" mistakes an ideal for a possibility, and the ideal itself is questionable. No long land border running through mountains, rivers, deserts and forests can be physically sealed against all crossing; the terrain and the length defeat any wall, and resources spent chasing an impossible total seal are resources denied to the intelligence and rapid response that actually stop threats. Moreover, many borders, such as the open frontiers India shares with Nepal and Bhutan, carry legitimate and friendly traffic, trade, kinship and pilgrimage, that a complete seal would needlessly choke, harming the very citizens the border is meant to protect. What is more, a border is secured by a system of surveillance, patrolling, local cooperation and response, not by a barrier alone, and treating the wall as the whole answer neglects the links that do the real work. On balance, the better view is not to seal the border completely, which is neither possible nor always desirable, but to manage it: to combine physical barriers where they help with technology, intelligence, trained forces and the goodwill of border populations. The aim is not a line nothing can cross but a line nothing harmful can cross undetected.


Worked example 2

Prompt

"Special powers like AFSPA should be retained indefinitely wherever insurgency exists, because the forces cannot operate without legal protection."

Model counter-argument

There is genuine force in this statement. Forces deployed against armed insurgents in difficult terrain do need clear legal authority and protection from frivolous prosecution for acts done in good faith, and the absence of such protection could paralyse legitimate operations and demoralise personnel who risk their lives. The Supreme Court itself, in Naga People's Movement of Human Rights in 1998, upheld the Armed Forces (Special Powers) Act while laying down guidelines, so the law is not without justification. That said, the word "indefinitely" is where the claim goes wrong. Extraordinary powers are by their nature meant for an emergency, and powers that never lapse tend to drift from exception into routine, so that the disturbed-area status outlasts the disturbance that justified it. Moreover, allegations of excess under such powers, where they go unaddressed, corrode the trust of the local population, and that trust is the ground on which an insurgency is actually defeated; impunity therefore becomes self-defeating. The Jeevan Reddy Committee in 2005 recommended a rethink for precisely such reasons. What is more, indefinite special powers weaken the incentive to build the ordinary policing and governance that should eventually replace them. On balance, the better view is not to retain such powers indefinitely but to subject them to regular review, clear guidelines, accountability for abuse, and a stated path toward normal law as conditions improve. Legal protection for the honest soldier and accountability for the violator are not opposites; a force is strongest when it has both.


Worked example 3

Prompt

"Technology will soon make human judgement unnecessary in security work, so we should invest in machines rather than people."

Model counter-argument

Admittedly, technology has transformed security work, and rightly so: sensors, cameras, data systems and analytics can watch more, remember more and detect patterns far beyond human capacity, and underinvesting in them would be foolish. To this extent the statement is sound. However, it confuses gathering information with exercising judgement, which are different things. A machine can detect a movement or flag an anomaly, but it cannot weigh context, read intent, or decide the proportionate response, and a system that acts on detection without human judgement will mistake the innocent for the guilty and the trivial for the grave. Moreover, security work is finally about people: about earning the cooperation of a population, interpreting a tense situation, and exercising the restraint that distinguishes a lawful force from an arbitrary one, none of which a machine can do. What is more, technology itself depends on trained people to design it, read its output, maintain it and respond to it; a costly system with no skilled human chain behind it merely records events after they happen. By contrast, technology and trained personnel together are far stronger than either alone. On balance, the better view is not to choose machines over people but to invest in both, using technology to extend human reach while keeping human judgement at the centre of every decision that matters. The right question is not whether machines can replace judgement, but how to put the best tools in the hands of well-trained people.


Worked example 4

Prompt

"Reservation in public employment should be abolished entirely, because only merit should decide who serves the State."

Model counter-argument

It is true that competence matters greatly in public service, especially in demanding and responsible roles, and that any system which ignored ability altogether would serve the public badly, so the concern for merit is legitimate and important. To that extent the statement deserves respect. However, it rests on a narrow idea of merit and ignores the conditions in which merit is formed. Ability is not distributed by nature alone; it is shaped by access to schooling, nutrition, encouragement and opportunity, all of which have historically been denied to large communities by caste and social exclusion. A competition that treats the unequally prepared as though they started equal does not measure merit so much as inherited advantage. The Constitution recognised this in Articles 15(4) and 16(4), which permit special provision and reservation for socially and educationally backward classes and for the Scheduled Castes and Scheduled Tribes, as a means of repairing exclusion and building a representative State. Moreover, a public service that reflects the diversity of the society it governs commands wider trust and serves a varied population better, which is itself a kind of merit. By contrast, abolishing reservation entirely would not produce a pure meritocracy but would freeze the existing advantage of those already ahead. On balance, the better view is not to abolish reservation but to keep it directed at genuine social disadvantage, with attention to quality and to the eventual goal of a society in which such measures are no longer needed. The real question is not merit against equity, but how to build the equal opportunity that allows true merit to emerge.


Practise this

Take each prompt, write only the four headings (state, concede, turn, conclude), and fill them in within twelve minutes. Then test each reason against the question in developing counter arguments: would a fair-minded holder of the original view have to take it seriously?

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